An Unexpected Adventure

So I am still doing online school and I hope all of you are staying home and staying safe! But anyways this week for writing we had to choose a prompt from the slideshow that Ms Wilton made for us and there were 10 different prompts and the first one was An Ice Plunge, the second one was under the bed and the third one was Expecto Patronum. The fourth one was on the prowl, the fifth one was Homecoming and the sixth one was The Beginning, the Seventh one was An Unexpected Adventure and the eighth one was Mr Wolf, the ninth one was Hanging on and lastly the tenth one was also called Hanging on apparently but yeah!

So we had to choose one of those prompts and I decided to choose the seventh one which is the Unexpected adventure cause I found it really interesting and there was a story starter and we had to use the story started in our story and their were lots of activities we had to do for our writing as well and then we used to learn these languages features so we had to include them in our writing so here is my story and all the activities that I had to do for my prompt:

Red - Alliteration

Blue - Onomatopoeia

Orange - Metaphor 

Green - Hyperbole

Yellow - Personification

Brown - Simile

Pink - Idiom

She knew that it hadn’t been a good idea to leave the tap running, but now she was starting to enjoy

herself. Then suddenly the next moment she would blink her eyes there was a big hole!

All the water just started draining into the hole like a Human sucking so much food! Even the shower,

bathtub, toilet and like everything in the bathroom!

“Woah” Emily said! “Where am I”? “It’s so dark in here I can’t see a thing!,

Maybe it’s just my eyesight or I don't even know!” “But I need to get back to my house otherwise my

Parents are going to worry”! I felt the darkness suck me in the air!  “Wait, I just forgot their on Vacation,

well at least it gets me more time to get out of here cause I don’t want to stay here forever!” So as
Emily

kept walking to a direction she found a hidden tunnel or should I say sewer that led to the sea! She

decided to get something from her pocket called a Golden apple that can give you a ride under sea

with a bathtub! You know what they say the early human gets a bath!

And as she slowly, sluggishly, swam with a stinky shark to the sea and she could see her dreams come

true. She saw all the different animals and then splash all she could think about was living there

but the ride was like millions of miles… 10 years later… So after those years she knew she got her

dream in the winners bag and she lived under the sea with all of her friends happily ever after!

But where are her parents….. 

The Different Activities:

The Questions:	My Answer:
Where did her Journey begin?	Emily left the tap on and then when she came back into the bathroom the whole room was flooded and it even made a big hole!!!!
Why was it unexpected?	Because she didn’t really know what was going to happen and then a big hole happened and she forgot to turn the tap off so it was just a big mess.
Where will she go on her adventure?	Well she goes and sees her dream come true and she never knew that it would happen especially like this way and she loves to see animals and she always wanted to live under the sea!
What things will she encounter?	Her dream is living under water and even seeing animals and living the best time of her life but the only thing she doesn't know is if she will see her parents ever again.
How will she get back home?	Her animal friends can take her back safely at her house door and her parents won’t be worried anymore because they finally found their daughter.
How might she be feeling in the adventure?	Very happy and worried and also sad at the same time cause she would feel happy cause her Dream has come true. Worried because she doesn't know what her parents would think and sad cause she would miss her family!
What will her Parents be thinking?	They would probably be very worried and they would go looking for her until they find her!
Would you like to go on an adventure like this? If you do please explain.	I don’t really want to, to be honest because I would be very scared and I don’t want to go all the way under sea and I would miss my Family.

Sick Sentences:

Sick: The bath went through the water. 

Better Sentence: The slippery bath sluggishly past the silk

water.

Sick: It was a Sunny Day.

Better Sentence: As I woke up I saw the Beautiful Sunrise awaken.

Sick: The girl watched the Turtle.

Better Sentence: There was a little girl that looked 8 years old and she was

daydreaming at the very small Turtle.

My Verbs:

Water - Watering - My Dad was Watering

the plants.

Trickled - Trickling - My tears started

trickling down my face.

Bath - Bathing - I was Bathing in my

Bathroom.

Turtle - Moving - The Turtle was moving

very slowly.

Sun - Sunshining - It was Sun Shining this

afternoon.

The Girl - Staring - She was very still and

staring at the slow Turtle.  

Plug - Plugging - My Sister was plugging her

Charger.

Fish - My Dad took me to go Fishing!

Shower Curtain - Showering - I had to close

my Shower Curtain cause I was Showering.

Another Adventure Drawing: