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Thursday, 17 August 2017

How to make a super fun fake bee

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  1. Miss Morgan21 August 2017 at 17:02

    Hey Kylie,
    You have written some fantastic instructions. I think the bees you have made look fantastic! It would be great to have some pictures of what you created in your slide. Also, it is really hard to read your writing - maybe you could put a colour behind the text box - that will make the writing stand out.

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    1. Anonymous5 September 2017 at 10:04

      Hi Miss Morgan, Thanks for the comment and I did think my slide show was fantastic!. Your comment reminded me of when I was at home and I was on my computer and I putted a lot of pictures. Maybe you could put a question for me so I can answer me. Can you ask a uestion please?

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    2. Miss Morgan5 September 2017 at 10:24

      Hey Kylie,
      I guess a question could be did you know that the colour of the text made it hard for the reader to read?

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  2. Anonymous22 August 2017 at 10:00

    Morena Kylie, I thought your bee slideshow was great because you had pictures and I could follow the instructions. The way you added in the pictures to your instructions made it so much easier to understand what I had to do. Your background image has made it difficult to read some of the text on some of your slides. Next time, you could think about having a textbox with colour in the background so it makes your text stand out, or you could think about not having such a big background picture. Did you make one and if so how did it work out? Do you have a picture of it please?

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  3. Anonymous19 October 2017 at 10:15

    Hi Kylie,
    I like the way you included images that you drew yourself into you slideshow. I also like the instructions that you have put and it is easy to understand. Next time maybe you could work on using different colored text or changing the background image so we can read the text easily. Also if you made one maybe you could add a picture of it into the slideshow.

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  4. Anonymous20 October 2017 at 12:30

    Hi Kylie, it is Ellie from room 8. I really like your slide show on How to make a super fun fake bee. It had very cool pictures of bees. Next time could you please make your words stand out as it was hard to read. Did you end up making a fake bee yourself?

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  5. Anonymous7 December 2017 at 12:51

    Hi Ellie, Thanks for your comment. And I mean sure I can make my words stand out because I am a little smarter now I think you are too. And we did make a fake bee.

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  6. Maggie20 June 2018 at 09:31

    Hi Kylie it's Maggie
    I liked how you made a bee slideshow to show people how to make a fake bee because if you actually touched it could sting you then lose its sting and die. Did you try to make one yourself?

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