WALT combine prior and new knowledge to come up with new ideas.
This week for reading Danny (My Group) we read a non-fiction Article and it was about a boy who had this condition called cerebral palsy, and this condition means that he can't swallow food so he can like only eat liquid stuff and that is poured into a tube that can just go straight to his stomach. But he has a more bigger problem he is allergic to a lot of different types of foods, and he is also very allergic to milk but the only mild he is allowed to drink is sheep milk and so his Mum and Dad keeps herd of fifteen sheeps just for this little boy who is allergic to other milk except sheep milk, the sheeps that his family keeps are Friesians. They are a little bit bigger than other sheeps, and they don't really produce that much milk every year and so the mild that the boy doesn't use they put it in the freezer, and theses sheeps are famous for giving birth to twins and triplets.
But anyways this week for our synthesis work we had to make our own improved milk shed so here is mine:
But anyways this week for our synthesis work we had to make our own improved milk shed so here is mine:
Stay tuned for more non-fiction work!
Hello Kylie,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good blog post I like how you explain the text so people can understand the task, I also like hjow you put some information about the sheep, maybe next time you could take a new picture because this one is blury and the lighting is dark so you can't see it that well
but overalll your blog post is really good
Ella-😀
Hey Ella! Thank you so much for your comment I really appreciate it. I know sometimes it gets blury and I will try and make it more clearer for you so you can actually see my work.
DeleteThank you again.
- Kylie
hi KyLiE!!
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, nice blog post!! I like how you added information and labels to understand more. I also like how you added clear pictures of what your idea is. This kinda reminded me when I went to a farm with my brother and his friends to help out, we had a egg fight..
Overall, awesome blog post!
-Mya :)
Hey Mya! Thank you so much for your comment, I don't get why you didn't add a helpful but all goods cause I don't have to fix up anything! Again when you had that egg fight boy that made me laugh!
DeleteThank's for your comment again!
- Kylie