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Wednesday, 11 December 2019

The Big Jump! W9 I Synthesis Work

For our last week for reading each group is reading a fiction book, and Danny (my group) is reading a fiction book called The Big Jump and there is a boy called Tim and his class went to camp and one of the last activities they had to do on camp was to go on the flying fox and it was really high and pretty long. But anyways let's not get off track. There was another boy called the Big Daddy but his actual name is Charlie, but only his teachers call him Charlie everyone else has to call him Big Daddy because he is the toughest boy and strongest boy in school, and he is not scared of anything but when he went to see the flying fox and he was terrified but he didn't say that because he didn't want to be embarrassed.

Anyways besides that I'm not going to tell you more because for our Synthesis work we had make a scary flying fox so here is mine:


2 comments:

  1. HI Kylie,
    I like your blog post,
    I like how you added what the story was about so they could understand the task I also like how you added what the task was so it makes sense
    maybe next time you could have brightness up so it is easier to see
    But that is a very good blog post Good Job Kylie
    Ella😊

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  2. HI KYLIE! I like your blog post! Something I like about your scary flying fox, is that you added lots of labels, so it made sense. Another think I like it that you added a lot of colour which made it more colourful and understanding. I think you could work on cropping the image, so it's more clear and we can see the idea properly.

    - Mya

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