The true story of Hansel and Gretel....

Last week on Friday the seniors of St Bernadette's got to go on a school trip for the Hansel and Gretel show. There was also some other schools as well that came to see the show of Hansel and Gretel. Our school was sitting at the top but like closest to the bottom, I don't know if I explained that right so please tell me if I'm wrong or right in the comments! But anyways, first we were at school and then after Morning tea I think we got on the bus and I sat with Mya and all we did was like talk about stuff and we did this thing called Boom, snap, clap and yeah it was really fun, then we got off the bus and we saw some other schools sitting on the grass, and then Mrs Lee told us to sit in the grass as well with the other schools. I didn't really like sitting on the grass because it was like really, really, really hot! 

Then few minutes past and we finally stood up and started walking to the Auditorium where they played the Hansel and Gretel show! While we were walking we had to stop a few times cause it would either be stopped because some schools are walking past, or some other strangers might be walking past or some of the people in our school are being silly and I don't mean it in a funny way I mean it as being Naughty! Then we finally made it and we still have to wait for 10-15 minutes cause other schools went  in first before us. As we stepped inside it was big but not until we actually got into the actual Auditorium, cause that was even bigger!

We got in our seats and waited for a bit then it finally started, they introduced the characters and then turned off the lights and began the show, we only got see the second act to Hansel and Gretel but it was really good. I almost fell asleep! But yeah, now for this week for writing we gotted to write our own twist of Hansel and Gretel! So here is the true story of Hansel and Gretel:

The true story of Hansel and Gretel…

“What just happened!” Gretel Shouted.

“I don’t know what we did wrong” Hansel exclaimed.

“Maybe we were eating all of the food, I mean our step Mum did love food”

“Maybe it was, but I’m still hungry”

“Same”

“Maybe instead of going back to that rusty and old and poor looking house maybe we should find a
more fancy one of
our own”

“But how about food, how are we going to get food!”

“Don’t worry cause we’re just getting started!”

So Hansel and Gretel were on their way to get some food first, suddenly they saw something in the
distance of the forest so they went to check what this Mystery thing in the distance could be.
Once they reached their destination they saw what it was, and it was a house made out of lots of
different types of candy, their was gingerbread, lollipops, gummy bears and you name a candy it’s on
their. Hansel and Gretel heard some big and loud stomps coming from the back of the candy house
was a scary and heroundes witch that had a lollipop dress and a cane that was and actually candy cane!
The witch suddenly said “Come in, come in if your hungry I got lots of candies for you to eat”,
“Of course we would love too” Hansel and Gretel said in sync. So the three stepped inside and it was
like a dream to them so Hansel and Gretel started to actually eat the whole house. They ate the couch,
the tv and even the roof and everything, but as the two were about to eat their next big bite they heard
a cackle coming from their left and they saw a house made out of potato and meat. 

They quickly ran to their left and knocked on the door and then another scary and heroundes witch
opened the door and they ran straight in and ate everything just like they did on the candy house,
the witch didn’t have time to make a welcoming! So the witch stopped Hansel and Gretel and told them
that they are welcomed to eat some of her food in the kitchen, but Hansel and Gretel just started to
keep on eating the witch's house, at least the witch made a welcoming, but still Hansel and Gretel
nearly ate the whole entire house but then they heard another cackle from another witch coming
from their left again! So Hansel made a big hole in the Potato and Meat house and went straight
to the house on their left and this time it was a Vegetable and fruit house. 

But this time they knocked and they letted the scary heroundes witch to her welcoming or maybe
his welcoming but we’re not going to get on to that bit of the story, the witch said
“Welcome to my healthy household! You are welcomed to eat anything
you want from the fridge and pantry!” But Hansel and Gretel just ran into the house just like they did in
the other last two houses they’ve been in and even though this house was made out of Vegetables and
fruit they just loved food so much they would eat Vegetables and fruits! Until they finished the whole
house! They went back to the other two and finished those two houses as well. After Hansel and Gretel
were so full they couldn’t eat anymore so they laid down in front of the three houses and went to sleep!
But meanwhile the three witches were so mad that the three witches came together to make a plan that
would destroy Hansel and Gretel! 

“Wait, are you guys thinking what I’m thinking!” Candy Witch said.

“I think so”

So the three witches made their plan and their plan was to trap them in a cage and then give them a
potion that would make them work against each other, and they thought it would be the perfect time
now because they’re both sleeping like their dead. After a wee while, the witches were ready, they
put them in chains and in like a tall house but one person can only fit in it. They separated them
because they knew they would find a way out. Minutes past and suddenly Hansel and Gretel
started to wake up and so the the Candy Witch and the Vegefruit witch gave both of them the potions
and when Hansel and Gretel opened their eyes and started to fight open the cage so they could fight
each other, and I bet you’ll know what the witches did, your right! They opened the cage so they could
fight. The witches said “Now this is going to be could” And after they said that they started to cackle like
Maniacs.

Meanwhile, Hansel and Gretel was still fighting, and then the witches saw a really hot oven and
they screamed out “Come on Hansel push Gretel in the oven!” And that’s what Hansel did, but then
suddenly Hansel and Gretel quickly ran to the three witches and shoved them into the oven instead!
“Woah, did we just do that!” Hansel shouted.

“I think so, but how did we not fall for their potion.”

“Well maybe I secretly spitted it out”

“Maybe I did too” Gretal said while laughing.

But now they didn’t know what to do, but suddenly they heard footsteps coming closer and closer,
but it wasn’t another witch it was their father! Hansel and Gretel were so relieved that their Father
had come to take them back home!

After a few hours later when they got back home their step Mum was gone, and so the
Father explained what had happened. I’m not going to tell you that cause that’s another whole
different story. But that’s the true story of Hansel and Gretel!

The End!

Maybe next year your school might get to watch it too!