The three Identical Musketeers

This week for writing we got to write about anything we wanted but firs we looked at Narrative writing, Narrative writing is when you get to write whatever you want but you need to include some things like language features, Characters, as problem + solution, paragraphs and Character Development. Language features is like Simile, Onomatopoeia and Hyperbole and all those ones. Characters is obviously the Main people, the problem + solution is when there is a problem then you have to try a solve it. And then lastly Character Development and that is when you describe you Character like through out the story so like not straight away. So then after we discussed all of that we got to start our writing and I decided to write about these three triplets who get bullied and then they've had enough of all the bullienes so they release something inside them then go to a new school called sky high!

(Oh and my story has a crises bit in it so I'm just gonna quickly tell you guys what a crises is, a crises is when like your problem gets worser and worser.)

And I'm not going to tell you anymore about it so you got to read my story so here it is:

The ones that are highlighted yellow are the ones that are original.

The ones that are blue are the ones that have been changed.

The ones that are pink bits are the crises bits.

12/11/19

The Three Identical Musketeers.

“Hurry up girls, we’re getting late!” Their Mum said. 

“Okay hold on we’re still packing our bags!” they said. 

“Come on the bus is going to be here soon”. 

“Ok Mum”. 

So the bus was off to go to Lacy’s, Kacy’s and Macy’s new high school. So here is a little story about how they needed to go to a new school, it all started when they used to live in a historic house at 12 Rex Street Avenue and there was a school close to their house and that the school was called Jehnson School, that’s the school the that Lacy, Kacy and Macy used to go to, but now it’s time for the real story....

So the first day they went to Jehnson School they thought they fitted in perfect perfectly and they thought that because they were only 5 years old when they first started, but while they were giving process progress in that school, a few years later when the three Identical Triplets were year 6’s they started getting bullied from these girls called Charlotte, Joryden and Ellie. They were getting bullied because they had like different colored eyes and they looked different to others and everyone would say they look terrible! 

But it doesn’t matter if you look different. Those were the three main bullies in the school, but then one day the three bullies told the whole school to gossip about Lacy, Kacy and Macy, but and those the triplets didn’t know what the school was up to. The teachers and the principal of there school didn’t even know what the other students were up to as well. But whatever the school was planning on was something really bad….

The School was planning on bullying those three girls and they did that just because they’re different, but they didn’t know that there was something special inside Lacy, Kacy and Macy. But they just kept on bullying them every single day, every time the Triplets came home they would cry in tears looking like a Monster with hair everywhere them! They were getting bullied each day, the triplets were tempted to leave the school by the students but the triplets didn’t want to cause they actually started to like the school a bit more so they didn’t want to leave. 

But the school wouldn’t stop, until they were year 8’s. And on that last day the triplets couldn’t take it anymore they used something that was inside bursting to come out, but they had to wait till it was the perfect time to use it, so the triplets waited and waited until their special elemental dragons inside them ame our bursting like they didn’t want to be inside them anymore, Lacy’s elemental Dragon was a Blue Dragon for ice, Kacy’s dragon was red for fire and Macy’s dragon was green for Nature. So on that last day their hearts were pumping and thumping, and then the next minute the triplets used their elemental Dragons and powers on all the students but then a few seconds later the three triplets suddenly disappeared everyone wondered where they were and they were terrified of what the Triplets had just did, but they were also really amazed, the Students didn’t really care but everyone else was suspicious of who the triplets might be?....

So that’s how they transferred here into their new high school called, Sky high and it’s a high school for people who have powers just like Lacy, Kacy and Macy! The triplets didn’t know how to fit in, in their new high school cause everyone had different powers that they didn’t even know about. But everyone was different and unique just like Lacy, Kacy and Macy. Everybody was saying “Who are they, do they even belong here”.

The triplets would reply “I don’t know if we even do, this school looks different and I can’t believe this school is on a cloud”!

“Girls wake up, it’s the first day of high school, hurry up”!

“Ughhh it’s so early though (yawns)” They exclaimed.

“I baked pancakes”

“Alright guys we have to get up Mum cooked Pancakes”! Macy shouted.

“Fine, but the first one to get ready gets 4 pancakes”! Kacy said in an excited voice.

“Okay 3, 2, 1 GO!”

So they all started fixing their beds, getting dressed and doing the stuff they usually do in the morning. And the first one there was…. All of them, it was a tie. Well of course it would be a tie I mean, their triplets. So Lacy, Kacy and Macy ate their 4 pancakes and then suddenly they saw something in the distance it was the school bus! They grabbed their shoes and they quickly putted them on and then said a nice goodbye to their Mum. Once they gotted on the bus they sat quickly together cause they didn’t know anyone from Sky high.

Then the bus was off, a few minutes later they were on a bridge and then suddenly there was no more road at the end so then the bus just flew down, but then suddenly the bus had wings so it could fly! The triplets had no idea where they were going so they just stayed still and quiet. Suddenly a few seconds later something from the top of their head came down, it was a life saver jacket and they needed that cause the bus was flying to sky high and that’s when the triplets figured out maybe their new high school is in the sky and maybe that’s why it’s called sky high because it’s high up in the sky! “Oh wow, that’s amazing everyone their must be like us and we won’t get bullied.” Macy Shouted.

“Hopefully” Kacy said is a sad voice.

“I’m so excited to start our new life here” Lacy exclaimed.

“It would be so cool if we could make some new friends here”! Kacy said in an excited voice.

So then the bus was going higher and higher until they finally reached their destination…. “Woo hoo, Sky High”! Everyone shouted like they came to their dream country. Everyone got off the bus and they were standing on a cloud! The triplets were like so amazed and really excited, this made their whole life even better. Then throughout their high school year they started making progress in their work and they made new friends, that’s how they became great people on earth!

The Moral of this story is if someone is bullying you don’t let them in your way, stand up for yourself, and if you see someone else getting bullied stand up for them as well!

Questions:
Q1: How would you feel if you met the three triplets?
Q2: Would you like to be one of the triplets?

Something I found difficult was trying to think of what to right cause I really wanted it to be interesting.

Something I enjoyed was writing it cause while I was writing it I found it really fun and interesting!

Stay tuned for more writing!