This week for writing we have been learning about descriptive writing, and Mrs Lee showed us eight words and they were, Hyperbole, Onamatipaia, Simile, Personification, Alliteration, Idiom, Repetition, Metaphor. My favorite one would probably be the Hyperbole because like its when yo say something but it's just like an expression for example: my head is about explode! So Mrs Lee told us to make a copy of a slideshow and then write one descriptive sentence about one picture. Then the next day we had to use 4 of the descriptive words at the top for another picture and then after we did that we could write another 4 for another 2 pictures.
Sorry I haven't finished all of the pictures but this is what i have done:
I will try to finish it!
Friday, 1 November 2019
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Hi Kylie, I'm Bella from Yaldhurst model school in Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post it was really cool I all the detail you put in to your blog post. I love it.
Kind regards,
Bella
Kia Ora Kylie
ReplyDeleteI liked how with the rhino one you used bursted in your description.
Next time I think you could work on making your description so I can understand it.
so you could improve on I bursted with hurt that doesn't make to much sense what about I bursted with pain aching through my head to my body.
Why did you make this?
-Olivia