For Writing in Room 5 this term we have been learning about descriptive writing and so before we start any writing this term each day when we do writing we do something called a quick 10 and that is when Mrs Lee (Our Teacher) Puts a picture on our TV and then we have to come up with 10 describing words about it, and we did this two weeks ago and we're posting it now so yeah I don't know what's going on in Mrs Lee's mind? But anyways two weeks ago Mrs Lee gave us a writing template of a burger and it had the top bun as the introduction, the pieces of food inside were different categories of like what we wanted to talking about so like 3 paragraphs of different writing, and then the last bun was the conclusion.
So what we had to do is find a buddie and my buddie was Mya then you had to choose a character from a movie or a book but like someone who is like not from the class room. Me and Mya chose Princess Jasmine from the movie Aladdin. After that we wrote our whole descriptive writing about Jasmine on a google doc so here is our descriptive writing about the wonderful Princess Jasmine:
Princess Jasmine is a very fearless person. She has always been so confident about never giving up. She will always keep trying till she succeeds, Princess Jasmine always knows what is best for her and others. Princess Jasmine is as Brave as a whole Army of Soldiers.
She has a creative personality. She is a caring person to everyone she loves and to people she might not even know. She’s such an adventurous person, and she is very proud even though she might mess up on something. She is so confident in everything she does and she doesn’t let anything get in her way. She encourages other people to stand up for themselves and do what is right to protect their land and family! If Princess Jasmine was not alive then her land would probably explode!
Princess Jasmine is a wonderful person with wonderful brown eyes and her brown eyes make her unique. She has beautiful black hair. She wears a shiny gorgeous blue and gold necklace with a special heart on her necklace.
Sometimes Princess Jasmine can have some problems in her life even though it looks like she can handle everything. She has a problem that her Dad wont let her rule Agrabah. She can only rule Agrabah if she marries someone. Another one of her problems is a bad one. She had to kiss a man called Jafar like Mwah! To distract him from trying to hurt Aladdin. She really does anything to protect someone or something.
Princess Jasmine is a very brave and confident person because she never gives up and she always does her best. She loves to adventure, because she always likes to do stuff to help out even though it’s hard for her. Jasmine is very outgoing and fearless because she never is scared of anything and she’s always hyped and happy to do something. She would do anything to save her Family and Agrabah. The victory for her is in the bag.
If your wondering about what the high lighted sentences well what we had to do is you know how I posted those pictures and we had to write like 4 of those descriptive words in each picture well what we had to do was pick 4 of those different descriptive words and put them in our story so me and my buddie picked, Hyperbole, Onomatopoeia, Simile and Metaphor. So those are the high lighted Sentences.
Here are some questions for you to answer:
Q1: What is a simile?
Q2: Give me an example of an Onomatopoeia word?
Q3: Which Descriptive word is this (She was slow as a Turtle)?
Kia Ora.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because this has a lots of writing and the story thing is amazing.
No words.
Like you dont need to improve anything.
It is amazing.
MYKIALA YMS