I wish I could always do gymnastic
There was a girl called Rosie she loved to do gymnastic. Time for homework said her mother why said Rosie you need to learn your time tables said her mother uhhhhh said Rosie I wish I could always do gymnastic. Then a fairy came out and she said to herself was that a wish it sounded like a wish so she did her magic and flyed away. So in the morning she walked down the stairs and ate some breakfast. After that she went to her room and got changed but when she putted her pretty cute dress on it changed into a liotard so then she tried another dress but it changed into another one so she had to deal with it. There couldn’t be anything wrong with my hair. So she did her hair into a braid but suddenly in changed into a hair tie but she thought it was fine. So then she went to her trampoline to do some gymnastic. But then the fairy came again and said do you want me to make your life normal again yes said Rosie. Your wish is my command so then her life turned back but she had to do homework. Why did I wish that. So she had to do her homework. And that’s the story of when Rosie always did gymnastic. The End.
Hi Kylie.
ReplyDeleteIt's Atalina from room 6. I thought your story was outstanding. Something that you could work is your speech marks and also reread your writing. Other then that I thought that this was outstanding and it really engaged me into reading your story.
Hi Atalina, Thank you for your comment. I will work on my speach and I will reread it. Bye
Delete