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Wednesday, 14 November 2018

Commenting time!

For the next thing we had to do for lesson 4 of our summer learning journey is... we had to make a screenshot of a comment that you have to send to a person is your class, a person from a different school but in our cluster and comment on a junior class blog.

Here is the one when you had to send a comment to a person in your class:
Hey Ella, I really liked how you added pictures of what is saying of what is wrong and what is right. This made me think about when people do bad stuff they get Bad consequences and when people d good stuff they get good consequences. Maybe you could go back and fix your title because it said Ho to make good choices and I was really confused with that. Have you ever made a bad choice?


Here is the one when you had to send a comment to a person from a different school but in our cluster:
Hey Aisa, I am Kylie and I know you don't know me but I think the work you have done is incredible I really like how you linked the countries to where they are. It made me think about if I went all around the world like how cool would that be. Maybe next time you could add some colors and pictures of how that country looks like. Where do you live?

Here is the one where we had to send a comment to a Junior person:
Hey Ari, I really liked how you have a different sense of humor and I love how you are really different to me that means you are special because you are different then others. It made me think about how I did mine and how it was completely different. Next time you could go back and add some full stops to you description because when I was reading it I was loosing my breathe. Do you really have lot's of Family members.

Also if you want to see there blogs here are the links.

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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.

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