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Thursday, 13 September 2018

The Mysterious Adventure

W.A.L.T write a descriptive story based on a picture


We had to write a brain storm in our books and add 30 things we could see in the picture, who are the Characters, what happened before the picture, what happened after and also what was happening while the picture was getting taken. The last thing you had to do was to write it on your device and include spelling, punctuation, checking to see if it makes sense and also best words.



The mysterious Adventure.
It had been three days since it had gone missing.
One minute she had held in her hand, the next it had vanished
right in front of her eyes. How could it just disappear?
The next day she went inside her cabin, she saw 6 pieces of
Diamonds and she also saw instructions included. Adalina read
it, and it said that there was 7 Diamonds in this set. She said
to herself, I have to find the last one and she had 3 hours to
find the missing piece. She took her clean magnifying glass.
Then suddenly she found what she was looking for, it was a
shiny blue Diamond and it was also a shimmery one.
She locked it with the other Diamonds and she started to turn
very tiny so that she could go in her dream door.
It was a dream that she had the other night and it’s about
when she goes through a secret door that leads her to a place
filled with unicorns!!!!!!
And that is where she lived from now on. The e-n but wait, I
need to describe her to you. Her name is Adalina, she loves
candy and chocolate, she is friends with a goblin and her hair
is brown, she also has really cool green eyes and she always
wears casual clothes.
Now it’s the end.

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